My Trailer First Draft

The two trailers above are not much different to each other. Their editting are fairly similar but I changed the music in 'Trailer Catts 90 Lives2' to make it match more and be more dramatic in the compilation of scenes in the middle of the trailer. However it still has not worked very well yet and the scenes are too long so make the trailer less interesting to watch.
The feedback I got from it was mainly positive when the viewers were aware that it was only a first draft. I will ask for more feedback on the next version of the trailer so I can have a better idea on what I need to improve on from the viewers.